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 James Thomson: The City of Dreadful  Night.  Canongate Classics. 77 pp.

 

 

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The Port Glasgow poet James Thomson began  the four-year work on his great pessimistic poem  "The  City  of  Dreadful  Night"  early  in  1870.  Two months previously, as his 35th birthday loomed,  he  had  burnt all his private papers. It was all he could do "after this terrible year", he wrote in his diary. In his helpful

18-page introductory analysis  to  this  solitary  reprint  of the poem, Edwin Morgan writes "Why 1869 was 'terrible'  no  one has been able to explain". This particular statement needs redressing.      

 

Two people of significance to  Thomson's  life  had in fact recently died, and Thomson's future in November 1869  was  not promising. Joseph Barnes, friend and surrogate father in Thomson's youth,  had  died  at the end of October 1868. Then in June 1869 Thomson's close friend  since the 1850's and fellow literature enthusiast, James Potterton,   died  aged  34  of  tuberculosis.  Thomson's only income as a clerk was  under  threat,  and  was  soon  to  be lost in the firm's bankruptcy. He had been forced to borrow money  a number of times; and had begun drinking again "after a year's  abstinence". Previously his repeated abandonment to drinking bouts had been such as  had  necessitated his being searched out and brought home "bruised and wounded" to be nursed for some days. There was no one, in Thomson's solitary lodgings in 1869, to search  him out or nurse him now. All these factors may of course  have  been  in  addition  to something unknown. But evidence  enough  has  been  published  to  indicate  reason for sad personal evaluation.      

 

If a source of  biographical  impetus  need  be  required  for the central pessimism in "The City of Dreadful Night",  then  the "Dead faith dead love dead hope" leit-motif in the poem -  a  reversal  of  the  "faith, hope, charity" of 1 Corinthians, favourite book of his  mother's millenialist Irvingite companions - may be interpreted as emblematic of the "spiritual, physical and mental illness" that some take as a definition of  alcoholism.  For these, "The City of Dreadful Night" may  be  interpreted,  across  the  century,  as  "Jimmy's  Story".  That impending city of the New Jerusalem for which his mother yearned - and which was further proclaimed as imminent by Rev  John Cumming, closely associated with the London asylum where Thomson was reared  -  was  a dream unrealised.

 

But dream is the appropriate word: for "The City of Dreadful Night" can be seen as the bitter terminus of that medieval Dream  Tradition  in  which  the  poet falls asleep to dream of fair women in the  Garden  of  Love.  William Dunbar had satirised that tradition in his "The Twa Mariit  Wemen  and  the  Wedo". In Thomson's epic, the dream is entered without even the salve of sleep; in place of a garden, there is a city of deranged males, in darkness;  overlooking the city sits the sad female figure of Melancolia.      

 

I am sure a case can be made for "The City of Dreadful Night" as a kind of pre-monitory "green" poem, presenting the  world  of the Redundant Male abandoned to urban industrial darkness,  having  in  the  name  of "progress" banished the Female, and  the  Organic.  Others  will  picture  a  lonely  universe  of  male repetitive-compulsive behaviour; of men who  have  rejected  a God obsessed with sex and physical retribution - but who have found that self-diagnosis is not the same as cure and release; and whose  lapses  into  compulsion can be seen as the private rituals of a futile  quest. 

 

The  truth  is  that  the great mystery and balance of "The City of Dreadful Night" is such that people will find in it what they want to find in it, and will  exhume that buried subtext which they imagine makes them party  to  the  exclusive  under-standing  at  which  Thomson,  in his preface, avowedly aims. One  indisputable  cause  for  celebration: here at last after a mere  120  years, this  great  Scottish  masterpiece has at last been published in Scotland.

 


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